Hey DH! Beautifully written piece! I did just want to clear up a little bit of an adjustment with your Star Shards so there wasn't any confusion. The Character Multiplier is applied when characters are active participants in a story (when they have meaningful dialogue, action, and push the plot along in some way), so it wouldn't apply here because this is a piece of Sky reflecting on the events that occured. This is still a wonderful and emotional prose!
If you have any questions, you know where to find me! Thanks!
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Hey DH!
Beautifully written piece!
I did just want to clear up a little bit of an adjustment with your Star Shards so there wasn't any confusion. The Character Multiplier is applied when characters are active participants in a story (when they have meaningful dialogue, action, and push the plot along in some way), so it wouldn't apply here because this is a piece of Sky reflecting on the events that occured.
This is still a wonderful and emotional prose!
If you have any questions, you know where to find me!
Thanks!
2024-02-03 08:44:10
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